Wednesday, March 4, 2009

feedback

well as far as past experiences go with feedback im generally used to getting more feedback relating to spelling and grammer im not really used to getting feedback relating to the content of my work. im really looking for the kind of feedback i can grow from and use later in my work such as what i could have done better and does my paper make sense to the reader so on and so on....

Feedback

The type of feedback I'm used to getting back is the feedback that corrects my essays or stories. This type of feedback was from high school when i would turn in an essay or story, as a rough draft most of the time. Then i would have to correct and and turn it in, and even when i turned in the final draft i still got feedback of how my paper could've been better wrote.

This feedback is effective because it gives me guidelines and opinions from people explaining how my paper could be better.

The type of feedback i want back is feedback that helps me write my paper better, gives me some pointers, and opinions that will make my paper better. It would look something like, "I think this idea should have quotes or a fact supporting this idea or opinion"

what could help

The kind of feedback im used to getting are usually things about not explaining all the way and typos. The type of feedback I would like to get would be if what I'm saying is making sense. Trying to not lose the reader in anyway and keep them tuned into what I'm saying. So maybe I can recieve feedback on if I'm giving enough examples or details.

Feedback and its help

The feedback which i expect for a paper is usually a comment about the paper's content, if the reader like or dislike ideas in the paper. Moreover, sometimes, I would like to have feedback about my writing skills which are the use of words, grammar, phrases. In high school, my teacher usually gave me feedback about what I could improve to make my paper better such as: cut off redundancies, develop good ideas. I found feedback like this are really useful because then I can have any idea of what reader want or dont from my paper then make it better.
I would like to have the same type of feedback that I used to get. I would like feedback about what I am weak in and need to put more effort into it and what I already had. Sometimes, I want feedback about the choice of ideas, which ideas should I use, which one I shouldn't. I would like feedback be as specific as possible.

Soul Sonic Force, and feed back

The type of feed back that i am accustomed to is the one by teachers, students and peers usually do not take these group assignment seriousness (at least in high school they did). Teachers were always strait forward in what they wanted to say they did not let there personal opinions get in the way of there professional ones. The teacher feedback is really the only effective one, you are able to look at what you id wrong and then correct those mistakes before your next draft.
The type of feedback that i am looking for is an unbiased look at the technical terms of my writings. When peoples personal opinions get mixed into writing there feedback can be mixed and confusing. When you have and unbiased opinion about something you put aside your feelings and opinions and just look at the work at hand. when you do this it allows you to create the best feedback possible

Feedback, What im used to and what i want

To be quite honest the only feedback that i have ever received in my life was from kids in high school who were reading my high school writings. People know that kids in high school don't really give you all the feedback you need, or any feedback for that matter. So, the effectiveness was really irrelevant for me because i never really got any real feedback. Now, if i was to sit here today and say what kind of feedback i would want it would have to be mostly about grammar, mechanics, and punctuation because those are things that i struggle with sometimes. So if i could get feedback obviously about the things that i am struggling with it could help me understand it better and help me not to screw it up the next time i write. The only thing i don't want when it comes to feedback are people who find the tiniest little thing that you forgot to do and make it a large deal. I just want feedback on the really important things that i may have forgot to do or didn't exactly do the right way, so then i know if i can fix what they are giving me feedback on i will be on my way to being a better writer.

Feedback and whatnot.....

I am not used to getting back feedback and if it is, It is usually feedback the other person cannot really say very well they are lost at a choice of words for it. Feedback is something though I could do with or without it really matter to some people and not for some people, although it does help it is not needed all the time. I usually get feed back on how to change my writing but they never gave any detail on how it was wrong or what should I add or take out, which made it even confusing to fix something that was "broken". When It comes to the feedback I would like to get some feedback on if the paper's topic was good, how the writing flowed or, spelling and grammar just alot of detail and not just a sentence saying, "Oh, your paper lacked the requirements".